...the ripples Swan crafts in The Boys in the Trees reveal layers of darkness as textured and shaded—even luminous—to anyone familiar with looking deeply into shadows.It's bad enough that the word is foregrounded between em-dashes, but the editors had to rub my nose in it with the following headline for the review:
Dark, horrific, gripping, luminousAck! If I were paranoid (and I'm not saying I'm not), I'd start to worry that someone was reading my blog and baiting me on purpose. Please, please, let Martin Levin know. Please, please, join my desperate petition: No more luminous prose. Nor more lustrous writing. Or lambent. Or incandescent or radiant.
Maybe, in our age of climate change, if a reviewer wants to praise someone's "compact, fluorescent new novel", I'll accept that low-wattage alternative. But I remain blind to all the other light-minded review-writing clichés.
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A luminous darkness, this novel? Perhaps the reviewer was blinded by the dark somehow.
I outlawed "luminous" years ago when writing for Quill and Quire. It usually means, I think, that the author is caring about words over plot and the reviewer doesn't understand why or what's going on with that, but it must be fancy/cerebral and lit from within. My other rankler is "gritty." Means? Swear words and bodily fluids? I remember an editor at Georgia Straight--probably John Burns--objecting to my use of the word "kudos" in a review; it was a word, apparently, banned from the Straight lexicom and out it came, bless him. Rightly so. It is the role of editors to save us from ourselves.
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